so this is the first poster
based on the idea of What politicians say is like a fiction.
I quite liked this layout and i will have to explore more on layout and scale wise.
THINGS THAT I HAVE BEEN CRITIQUED BY CLASSMATES.
1. It reminds them of 1940 art Deco,border is in Retro style.
2. Therefore there is an age difference
3. Gap is too wide between image & text.
4. "What juicy tender result they'll make!, It i make them vote".
there are two
5. I missed out the between He chased (the) two kiwis
Fix IT!
+It will be good to get rid of whole story and put the message into obvious line.
ex) Politicians are liar
Just make it obvious + make image bigger center it!
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