The wolf and the kiwi poster

so this is the first poster

based on the idea of What politicians say is like a fiction.

I quite liked this layout and i will have to explore more on layout and scale wise.

THINGS THAT I HAVE BEEN CRITIQUED BY CLASSMATES.

1. It reminds them of 1940 art Deco,border is in Retro style.

2. Therefore there is an age difference

3. Gap is too wide between image & text.

4. "What juicy tender result they'll make!, It i make them vote".

there are two 

5. I missed out the between He chased (the) two kiwis

Fix IT!

+It will be good to get rid of whole story and put the message into obvious line.

ex) Politicians are liar

Just make it obvious + make image bigger center it!

Poster design

8.11 

Recently I have been working on my poster design in bigger format..

I personally liked two ideas

voting is a stair/step/bridge to no where.

and

What politicians say is like a fiction.

To be honest i was more confident on the idea of stairs made out of ballot paper more 

because i though the visual element would be more stronger.

Matt said he likes the idea for both so i could sway in whatever way i want to i guess..

as i include colour and the contrast more into the image i decided to put my font over the image.

8.11 Phoebe said..

butterfly is a symbol for freedom and happiness.

If i used bat it could look more like if something bad is going to happen to the stair. 

If i wanted to use this idea i had to make steps more accurate and stable on top but show it crumbles apart in the bottom.

At the moment focus is at the second half of the page

because of the colour and the heaviness of the layout.

this poster was designed to be more about people not knowing what politician to choose

because they all look the same 

but i definitely like the idea of story book illustration concept (ex. Aesop's fable)

I will have to work on this idea.

-What politicians say is like a fiction.